Hi, Pete.

Excellent backing and vocals. Loved the growl on "when that aching".

As much work as I've done on my songs, people have mostly said my "throwaway" songs are the best. Go figure.

In terms of the mix, the volume and balance are excellent. The vocal lacks a bit of "sheen" - I want to hear a touch of reverb, or something to give thing a bit more sense of space. There are places where I'd clean up the vocal, like "where he's seen thissss before", but I've got a lateral /s/, so I'm hyper-sensitive about stuff like that.

A bit of vocal doubling would be nice, but isn't required.

I'd suggest having a look at something like Panagement, my favorite free spacial effect. Did I mention it's free? I've got the full version, but I don't think there are any features in it you'd actually use. But I find it's really good at placing things in space, and somehow just making things better.

Anyway, nice song! smile

-- David Cuny

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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?

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