Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, B.D.

Excellent sound, but the vocal is uncomfortably crispy to my ears. Then again, I'm getting over a cold, so that might have some influence.

Other than that, nothing bad to say: good write, good production, sounds great.

Well, the emphasis on the first word feels like it falls on the second syllable instead of the first, because the second pitch is higher, which is weird to my brain. And that's being really nit-picky. laugh

Nicely done!
Thank you for your really detailed feedback, David [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]
Your ears are still perfectly fine, the vocals are indeed a bit (as you put it) "crispy".
But if I make it as perfect as possible (which I actually did in the first mix), the song loses much of its impact because the singer completely loses her youthful innocence.
But don't hesitate to point out such flaws, often they are NOT intentional, and I am always happy to learn something.