Originally Posted by Noel96
This is a great groove. I love the lyrics and the whole presentation. To my ears, there's a hint of British rock in this production. It sounded great and I really enjoyed where you took me. Your singing was full of confidence and it was very easy to hear all the words
Thanks Noel! Glad you liked the lyrics - they were a late addition. I just brain dumped; word-smithed to get the flow and variation in rhymes; and made some of the lines have a more positive outlook. Confident singing - I tend to take the approach (despite not having the best vocal) to say 'What the heck! Let's go for it!'.

Originally Posted by rsdean
Very nice job on this song. I like the way you approach the vocal here. A really solid performance. Great video as well.
Thanks Bob. I thought that falsetto note was going to be tricky but after a bit of doubling and a very minor pitch correction, it came out well.

Originally Posted by DC Ron
Super tune, Andrew. Very cool Bowie-esque classic rock vibe with tons of hypnotic hooks. The progressions are quite nice, too. Really like your vocals on this one and the streamlined (to my ears) vocal FX chain. Nice use of BiaB instruments, and those soloists do sound great together. Another shiny little pop gem!
Thanks Ron! I have a project template for any new songs with FX that have worked already in place, then I tweak them (or remove them) according to what the new song requires. Not foolproof, but it helps with my memory. Being a 10 pound pome (assisted passage to Australia from the UK; pome = Prisoner Of Mother England - a reference to Australia's convict past, but not us here in South Australia - we were a 'free settler' colony) in the mid 60s, we were immersed in British rock - more so than American - which was a later discover for me. It helps that I still have residual south UK accent that comes out when I get excited.

Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
I agree with Noel, it immediately says "I'm British".
Good vocals with a nice Bowie touch, and the chorus has a super cool chord progression.
I love it
Hi B.D.! It should say "I *was* British." Ha ha! Thanks for noticing the chord progression - always been interested in good progressions from an early age.

Originally Posted by WaoBand
Great chord structure here! I also thought the 2 guitars in the solo worked so well I'd liked to have heard more.
Hi Chay! Same comment to you about the chord progression. I am going to consider extending the solo.

Originally Posted by laurent4114
Great work on the guitars. I agree with WaoBand, we would have liked more guitar solos. Great energy.
Hi Laurent! OK - if I get two more votes for a longer or additional guitar solo, I'm going to do it. Where would you put the additional solo?

Thank you everyone for listening and your great comments and suggestions!

Andrew

Regards,
Andrew D
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