I LOVE the lyrics.
You're a lucky guy to have such a cool lyrics writer on your side.
I also LOVE your sparse arrangement, which leaves plenty of room for the vocals, which you fill perfectly.
Just right up my alley.
The icing is your singing, really well sung with wonderful harmonies.
And despite your doubts, the bridge works very well, so stop complaining!
My new favorite of yours [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]