Originally Posted by Twinkle Toes
Nice catchy flow to this tune Ron, enjoyed it. Not sure you even need the bridge, maybe just some rhythmic/instrumental break to build tension before going back into the heart of the tune. Having said that, it was neat to hear the phrase "shin splints" in a song. That's a first for me.
Mick

Thanks, Mick. Didn't repeat it in the original post, but all my lyrics come from my brother, and I use them verbatim. So if he writes something that looks like a bridge, the song I produce will have a bridge. This is not always an easy process, but I enjoy the puzzle-solving aspect of it.

Yeah, I think both "shin splints" and "eye floater" were lyrical firsts for me. His lyrics seldom sound like anyone else's, which I really enjoy.

Appreciate the listen!


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