Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
I LOVE the lyrics.
You're a lucky guy to have such a cool lyrics writer on your side.
I also LOVE your sparse arrangement, which leaves plenty of room for the vocals, which you fill perfectly.
Just right up my alley.
The icing is your singing, really well sung with wonderful harmonies.
And despite your doubts, the bridge works very well, so stop complaining!
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THANKS, B.D.! Yes, I'm lucky indeed. Always loved songwriting, but lyrics were my Achilles heel. It was a happy revelation when I realized that my brother was writing VERY cool lyrics, and had been for decades. Thanks as well for the compliment on the vocals. The harmonies and BGVs come pretty easy, but it takes a bit of work to squeeze out the lead vocals. Would probably be easier to program a vocaloid, but I like the challenge, and the results are generally satisfying. Will take your advice and stop complaining about the bridge...but it was a journey. smile Glad you liked the tune!


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