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Could you answer three things:

What do you think the song is about?

What 3 keywords/themes do you take from it?

Which single line points most clearly to the core message?

1. No clue
2. No clue
3. No clue


I hate to be negative but it's really dark and confusing to say the least.


You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.