Hi Drew!
Welcome to the User Showcase forum!
Some interesting chord changes in this song - it’s one of those that takes a while to get used to but slowly draws you in. Your lyrics in this song were direct, and I liked that.

I encourage you to also have a listen to and comment on other posters’ songs as well as posting your own. I’ve found that others appreciate comments and will listen to yours in return, and it’s also a great way to find out how others approach their own songwriting and production and get good ideas.

I hope you find the forum rewarding!

Andrew