Hi Vic.

I really enjoyed listening to this song. A 12/8 feel always gets my attention. For me, verse 2 lyrics were a standout.

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There was a bar. There was a waitress.
Seems only yesterday, ooh, but could be more.
She took your order. She took your reason.
Left you with no pride and nowhere to go,
so you sing out ...
Have mercy. Have a little mercy.
Have mercy. Have a little mercy on me.

"Left you with no pride and nowhere to go" is such an awesome line!

I congratulate your on your arrangement, your writing, your vocals and your production. In every way, this was a very satisfying musical journey.

--Noel


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