Hi, Paul.

Pleasant song, well sung.

Although the arrangement sounds great, what I'd really like to hear is a more upbeat tempo, and an acoustic guitar behind the chorus.

That is a chorus at 1:30ish, right? It's got a catchy, pleasant syncopation that I think would work with that.

Yeah, not the kind of feedback you were asking for! laugh

Nicely done!


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