Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Paul.

Pleasant song, well sung.

Although the arrangement sounds great, what I'd really like to hear is a more upbeat tempo, and an acoustic guitar behind the chorus.

That is a chorus at 1:30ish, right? It's got a catchy, pleasant syncopation that I think would work with that.

Yeah, not the kind of feedback you were asking for! laugh

Nicely done!

Hi dcuny, I reduced the temp to 67bpm as I thought my vocals sounded better not being rushed but I am aware most of my songs are a bit on the slower side. I didn't record my guitar well. I just plugged it in instead of recording the soundhole so my Takamine sounds a bit thin in this mix so I toned it down. I think the instrumental is the weakest part of this song as it's lacking some lead guitar and energy. The Chorus is at 0:55 + 2:10. 1:30ish is the fill/interlude. 3:22 is the chorus instrumental and final chorus at 3:57. I'm happy you pointed out those things, thanks again for your feedback.