Hi Opur (one day i'll know your real name...),

An interesting story about your musical journey and your "discovery" of BiaB!
I connected this discovery with the beautiful, yet dark, lyrics of this song. And I had to smile; the coronavirus period was indeed unpleasant, but it did give you the opportunity to discover how to make your own music. Something you always wanted, right? Without coronavirus, you might never have had this. What do you think?

About your song: I already said the lyrics are good and dark. Maybe a glimmer of hope at the end would have been nice, something like giving hope is a bit more positive.
The choruses are well-sung.
The verses are beautiful, but also sung a bit differently. That feels a bit artificial/forced. Maybe a bit more variation in the singing style could increase the energy a bit? After all, humanity isn't extinct.

Technically, I'd like to make a suggestion about the amount of reverb you use. For me, it's too much. Even dark songs don't have to sound like they were sung in a cave.
But, as I said, your singing is pleasant to listen to!
So, keep it up, "newbie"; grow ahead!

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130