Originally Posted by TuneMonger
This is a good song, Andrew. The lyrics were ingenuous, which I found appealing. I liked both the verse and chorus, and the musicianship was fine. Good work, you're quite the prolific one!
Hi Rob! I am so used to hearing ‘disingenuous’, I had to look up the meaning of ‘ingenious’ - thank you! To quote Elliott Smith regarding how prolific I am, ‘Bottle up and explode’ is an apt label - like many here on the forum, I had a lot of pent up creativity which BIAB allowed me to release, realise, and grow. Of my forum posts since being a member, 50% are historic songs recorded or remixed, and the other 50% are newly written. This song was written in 2022/23 and is a remix.
Thanks for listening!

Originally Posted by rsdean
Great song and vocals. Excellent guitars and a nice crisp mix. Enjoyed the video as well.
You're making some good music these days!
Hi Bob! Yes, I am pretty pleased with my rhythm guitar style and lead fills on this song - the bridge worked out far better than I had imagined. Thank you for your comment on my music - I’m enjoying myself!
Andrew

Originally Posted by Brno
The sound of your song reminds of the British band from the end of the 1960s, like the Move. Sweet song. I can't give feedback of the lyrics, because English is not my native tanguage.
Hi Esa! I am a deep listener of The Move / ELO / Wizzard / Roy Wood, so maybe there is a little of that coming out in my style? Probably.
Thanks for listening!
Andrew

Originally Posted by DC Ron
… I always read your description, mostly because I'm fascinated by musicians who have a coherent method. Something for me to emulate for sure.
Hi Ron! Likewise, I read most introductions and most comments of many posts. It is very interesting to understand what writers are intending and what listeners are hearing. We have contrasted our approaches in the Songwriting forum, and I am impressed at your ability to take another’s lyrics and render them to music while being true to them, whereas my songs are generally music first then lyrics. I have learned a lot both explicitly and implicitly through threads on this forum.
Thanks for listening and your support! Love your work!
Andrew

Regards,
Andrew D
Adelaide, Sth Aust
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