Hi Twinkle Toes, (what a great name...)
A very nice song! I like that bass and the solo guitar, but also your vocals here!

I'm not sure if the line "I dunno know anymore, I’ve had my fill
But if pride doesn’t get me, pure envy sure will" make sense to me.
Well, that doesn't matter, because in the song it fits like a glove.

Your vocals had a familiair sound, but I can't grab the name. It's a famous guy or group, so that must be nice to hear in your ears...
I have a feeling i will hear more from you!!!
Great song,
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130