If I didn't know any better, I would have thought it was Chris from Blue Attitude singing here, even though her voice has a bit different timbre.
Pretty good vocals.
I'm not 100% sold on the vocal harmonies, to me, it sounds like Melodyne doesn't work as well with Audimee as it does with human voices.
But I know from your work with J&B that you're pretty good at harmonies, so just sing the harmonies as well and send those to Audimee too.

The band you chose is perfect, just like your production.
The lyrics and the story are also very good, but I already expected that from Mr. "95% of all songs should be love songs" himself grin
I can't wait to hear it in the context of a full-length (Broadway) musical!