Hi, Oour. The melody is just beautiful and expresses the ethereal poignant lyrics. I really liked it. You mentioned some doubts to your vocals which I think work very well. Your vocals have a distinct sound that relates to the rest of us instead of the polished pro vocals that sound smooth and wonderful yet sometimes lose the meaning or feeling of what they're singing. Yours are honest and I often find that to be more appealing. I have horrible vocals. There are very few songs I've written that my vocals actually work on.