Hi Aurealius B,

Just like Ron, I want to extend a warm welcome to you!
Of course, the first time is exciting, and you don't yet know what "rules" we have here. But I am sure you will learn quickly. So let's stop talking and talk about the song.
It is an infectious song that makes you want to start dancing right away. But after we are done with that, exhausted and out of breath, I do have a few things I want to discuss;

For a 'wild' dance song, your voice sounds very close and "dry." I mean, of course, that some reverb and delay would be welcome. But I also found the emotion in the voice somewhat subdued, considering the atmosphere the song aims to project and the lyrics in any case; "shut up, dance!"

I would have screamed it a bit more towards the end. And I would also have liked to hear multiple voices there (towards that ending). Especially where you repeat that title so often. That adds more weight to the atmosphere.

I did think the accompaniment was good. Perhaps a distinct accent could have been added here and there, via the drums, or a strum with that electric guitar, if you know what I mean.
But, very nicely done and therefore an asset to this forum!

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130