It started as a very nice story, but it did end dramatically. It's just like real life!

I really think it's a very pleasant song, with the storyline skipping along nicely. But when that drastic turn came (in the story) and I had to swallow hard, it was confusing that the song kept going on so cheerfully. So suddenly it became more cynical. But the funny thing is, you get used to it very quickly. Something like, "Well, annoying, but that's just how it goes. Onward!"

Well done, though. As mentioned, a pleasant song, a very good voice, and nice lyrics.

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130