Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
When I read your lyrics, it never occurred to me that you were stalking anyone - so everything's fine.
It's always good to have a granddaughter at hand!
When couples successfully give it another try, it makes for a great story (both in film and music), and you did a great job with that.
Good listen, good band, good production.
Enjoyed and smiled smile
Thanks, Brain. Yeah, i've been at Charley's side everyday since she was born. A good place to be for sure.

Originally Posted by BlueAttitude
First time seeing the video for this one, nice! I love the characters you came up with.

Fun song, Marty, thanks for the invite, and thanks to those that mentioned my bit.
Hehe. Thanks, Dave. At first my prompts were giving the usual 5-o'clock-shadow guy with creepy eyes lusting for the door to open. Life is sometimes better in cartoon form. You may remember the video version with an Ai me in it. Now, that was wonky alright.

Originally Posted by floyd jane
HA! That Charley is a clever one...

Inside outside.The line between love and stalk is thin sometimes.

Good vocals.
Cool bass.
Cool guitar.

Nicely mixed.
Cute video.

fj

Thanks, Floyd. Yeah, that line is less ambiguous in legalese. smile

Originally Posted by WaoBand
Superb song every-which-way. Great vocals and Dave's guitar is always a treat. … Charley's comment brought up a smile! smile
Thanks, Chay. Yeah, Charley is a ton of fun.

Originally Posted by Sawmill Music
I feel obligated here to mention Peter Gabriel's "Intruder" . . .
Much obliged! Another one to give Charley so she leaves mine alone.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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