Hi AurealiusB!
Good song! This is evidence that a repeating chorus lyric works, and we don’t have to overthink it. Good notes summarising your project and the musical elements of the song. That’s a good chord progression you have in the verses. I was a little surprised by the slow-down in the bridge, but it worked wonderfully for re-grabbing the listeners attention ready for the run home.
Well done! Looking forward to your periodic drop of these album tracks!
Andrew