Originally Posted by rayc
Pretty successful Andrew.
The rhythm section lacks a little push but taht's hard to achieve in BIAB.
the vocals make a good draft/planning set. I can hear this with a a couple of confident voices being an absolute belter.
VERY cool song.
Thanks Ray! You’ve touched on what my main mission is – I want to illustrate the musical idea I had but without any pretense of commercial success for me or anyone else. To me, it’s a bit like doing a really good painting and have it hanging on the wall in my lounge room and have visitors comment on it.
Thanks for listening!
Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Pretty cool intro, Andrew.
I'm not sure if your song qualifies as Motown, but I'm no expert on the subject, so what do I know?
But I know a good song when I hear one, and this is definitely a good song.
I like the little details you’ve included, they really make the song interesting.
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Thanks B.D.! This RealStyle was a really good find and worked well with my song idea, and in turn helped inspire the arrangement of the song. I particularly like the impact that the vibes had from verse 2 onwards.
Thanks for listening!
Originally Posted by AurealiusB
I really loved the instrumentation in your song. Well done.
Song does have a bit of a soul feel.
Good vocal too. You have a unique voice. Slightly Bowiesque.
Hi AurealiusB!
Shout out to bassist Craig Young who provided the bass RealTrack used in this RealStyle. Yes, I do have a unique voice, and not the best singer, but I do love expressing myself in song. There’s something almost mystical(?) about singing, I reckon.
Thanks for listening, and looking forward for when you drop another of your songs!
Andrew

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Andrew D
Adelaide, Sth Aust
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