My first thought was "what a nice song - really lovely." My second thought was that maybe there was too much reverb on the lead vocal. I guess you could say that's a matter of taste, but it seemed like a lot of reverb to me. Sorry to report that, I know you've described how much you wrestled with the mix. I really like the song, it's quite memorable. The mix isn't bad as it is, but I think it would be perfect if you cut the reverb back a bit on the vox. Up to you, of course.

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