Excellent wriote, Vic. i especailly like the lyrics, and you crafted the perfect melody and band to present it. I like how you break it down for the bridge, very effective and dynamic. i think the bass and kick support the song very well. Normally i think of a kick hitting all quarters is for a dance song (like disco) where the dancers have no rhythm and need the constant reminders of the beat. This one changes that pattern enough to keep the dancers misstepping. smile


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