Hi Ron,

A beautiful song, very good lyrics, and a great melody.
But your vocals were the absolute star here!
As others have already said, it is strange that this song remained hidden for so long. Why?

The only thing I had to think about a bit was the melody in relation to the drums...
Where your vocals essentially dropped pauses, that busy drum emphatically did not. I had mixed feelings about that. Not bad, not at all, but...

Well, a lovely song all in all.

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130