Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
A gritty, raw yet polished sound, and a story that gives Quentin Tarantino ideas for his next film.
I love how Dave's guitar and your (really great) vocals interact.
On my third listen now.
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Haha. Thanks, Brain. QT doesn't make underground shorts, but if he did... Since December i've remixed/remastered over 120 songs from the last 5 years. Dave is on most of them. When you hear them all one after the other like that, you really come to appreciate just what Dave does for a song.

Originally Posted by WaoBand
I can't top what I wrote on the YT post ~ What a terribly, terribly, terribly sad song! 😪 Yet ... Yet ... Yet .... Dave's guitar is sooooo sexy! I wept in both woe and glee! 😂🤣😂 ~ but I always want to say great wordage re the 12 bar and 12 bars, blue. Very creative idea!
Thanks, Chay. And especially thanks for taking the time to say so on YT, too.

Originally Posted by MarioD
Marty and Dave, you have posted many great songs but IMHO this is your best to date. Of course I am bias as I love the blues but so what. Great vocal and lyrics. Dave's outstanding chops compliments your vocal perfectly.
Loved it
Thanks, Mario. Oh, i know you are a Blues fan. You live like right between Dave and me, and i often imagine the ability to get together at your place some Sunday for a jam.

Originally Posted by DC Ron
Ha!

Too cool for school. Side splitting write. SUPER vocals and a SUPERB guitar part from Dave. Crisp BiaB backing track. What's NOT to like? Nuthin' is the correct answer.

"Who's Alice?!"

Ha HA!

Totally relate to how you've grown through this forum's interactions.
Thanks for everything, Ron. Yeah, that's how it goes with me and lyrics. i just sit back and wait. The first line came from who knows where, but then i needed a word to rhyme with Dallas. The rest is his story.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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