An interesting song, in both a positive and a negative sense.
I really like your vocals, and the lyrics tell a nice story.
The chord progression/changes is sometimes surprisingly unusual and très cool, but it also feels sometimes out of place, especially when you’ve just built up a nice atmosphere and then there’s an abrupt change. (ignore my last statement if you like jazz. Jazz musicians do that all the time)
The same goes for the cowbell. Coitus interruptus grin
To sum it up, I can say that I _really_ like everything you made yourself (minus the cowbell), but the sound of the BIAB band seems kind of uninspired.
But it's definitely a song with potential [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]