Originally Posted by Birchwood
Hi Ron,

A beautiful song, very good lyrics, and a great melody.
But your vocals were the absolute star here!
As others have already said, it is strange that this song remained hidden for so long. Why?

The only thing I had to think about a bit was the melody in relation to the drums...
Where your vocals essentially dropped pauses, that busy drum emphatically did not. I had mixed feelings about that. Not bad, not at all, but...

Well, a lovely song all in all.

Hans

Thanks, Hans! I did change the drums so there is now some relief from the toms. REALLY appreciate your thoughts on that!

Well, the LYRICS are 45 years old, but the song is only about ten years old. Took me a while to realize what he had been up to his whole life. I'm sometimes not the sharpest knife in the drawer...

Ha!


DC Ron
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