Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Hi Marty!
Great song, great singing, good band, and Dave’s lead guitar is filthy! (Good)

Great storytelling in the lyrics - K-Dub Ya and I have a songwriting challenge we have to submit soon where the song needs to tell a story, so we’ve got a fine example in your song. Just wondering - is Dinah from the diner?

Gee, AI is getting good at video clips. I kept checking the fingers and they’re all accounted for - and no surplus either.

Loved it.
Andrew
Hello, Andrew, and thank you. Ha, yes, Dinah worked in the dinah during the day, and tended bar at night. Check the video where Sue deplanes while crying. Notice the random strangers who stay close behind her to see what her guy says about Alice.

Originally Posted by BlueAttitude
Hi Marty,

Man, such a great song! Love the lyrics, very clever.

Great job on the video too, watched it for the first time last time last night. Loved the "clips from the bands past performances" bit especially grin

Thanks to everyone that mentioned my bit.
Haha, i like thay typo of watching it for the last time. O' course it probably will be --even i don't usually go back to see it again. Moving on... Man, thanks for all your contributions. Those clips were all failed Ai attempts, like having my twin on drums and our drummer playing guitar.

Originally Posted by vicarn
Marty.
One of your best lyrics imo. Clever write.
Good mix and Dave's with it, too.

Vic
Thanks, Vic. Much appreciated.

Originally Posted by rayc
One word: UROOOOL!
Many many many thanks, Ray!

Originally Posted by K-Dub Ya
Hi Marty

You sure can sing and play the blues, and Dave did you proud on the solo. Blues only improve with age, and at 40 years old this is only getting better. Worthy of a jam with Joe B.

Kind regards
Thanks, Lee. Man, that would be cool having Joe B. and Dave in the same jam.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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