HI Rob.

This is very engaging.
I think that your use of Suno is superb.
I love the way you've used repetition and rhyme in the first two lines of each verse to lead the listener along.
That's a very sophisticated lyric-writing technique.
I listened on headphones and totally enjoyed it.
I wouldn't change a thing.

--Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2026