Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
“We weren’t cut out to be cut-out dolls
Or obscene graffiti on public walls”

Now those are excellent lines!

Aren’t you glad you finished this?!

We didn’t hear it before the drum revision but we like what we hear.
And we do get what you mean about the driving toms reflecting the emotional turbulence.

Your vocals, as always, shine and the outro vocals with your smooth guitar provide a lovely ending.

While reading your brother’s fine lyric we thought of the other side of “what if’s” for when the person who really only wanted friendship but did not listen to their inner voice and instead committed to a relationship that they knew would fail.

Enjoyed it!

J&B

THANKS, J&B! Ya'll are always too kind. Totally get "the other side" and when people commit, or don't, for all the wrong reasons. It keeps a LOT of lawyers employed, sadly...

DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
ASUS I9-12900K DAW, 32 GB RAM
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)