Damn, you got good ears grin! I stumbled with that exaxct word. I could have changed it. At one point I wanted to. But I was super focused on just singing it and never got back to that. Next time I will change words which sound senseless.

Other than that, this is a type of phrase I often see in AI lyrics so I was not surprized. It was up to a true human to fix it and I dropped the ball. I will also add that the Melody was very familar to me - sounds like other tunes I have heard (and sung) - in parts.

Did you listen to my cover on my sound cloud? This is my best example of my newly found mix voice ! Ya, its not perfect but it is "far better than bad" IMO. That is me on the G4 notes. crazy I am only entering my sixth month with my personal voice couch and my 2nd month with Chis. I feel improvement with each new song. smile

Thanks for the feedback.


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