This is a repost from seven years ago. I had made some revisions based on good forum feedback, but never relisted it for some reason. Rayc had concerns with one phrase in the lyric, "inviting stare," but it took me FIVE years to think up an option. Would "romantic dare" be better? I'd appreciate any feedback on that. EDIT: For the last line in the first verse, how about "I could see, there'd be no more despair." Not great, but better than what I've got.

BIAB RTs
bass: 683
guitars: 997, 1259, 2685
drums - ? no longer have the sgu
Vocals - Tom Bedlam of fiverr

Lyrics:

Okay...Okay-ay
I never really felt okay in this world,
Til the day... the day-ay
I looked up and you were there
And the way...the way-ay (yeah the way)
That you looked back at me,
It was such, such an inviting stare

And the things I see in you and me
Have opened my eyes wide
I just gotta tell you how I feel inside

Any time I get to feeling blue the thought of you gets me through the day,
Every time I look at you I think that I might be okay

Okay, okay-ay
It's been awhile and we're still intact,
I can say...yeah say-ay
I'm in love and that's a fact
And today...today-ay (yeah, today)
Is one that I'll never forget
Cuz you said, you said you love me back

Repeat chorus

Last edited by TuneMonger; 6 hours ago.
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