Lee, really nicely done. I'm hearing a bit of that "Baker Street" vibe in there, if that was the Gerry Rafferty feel you were going for. Super song, well sung. Lovely imagery. Sweet arrangement that cradles the story well. That tin whistle is cool indeed. The ending is creative but works quite well. I do think you self-grade WAY too harshly...

You've done a smashing job here.

My brother (lyrics) and I (music) share our stuff before it feels ready quite a bit. The only difference is he never reworks his part, and I almost always do. I do find the practice of "finishing" a song and then coming back to it later helpful in creating perspective.


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Presonus Studio One
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Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)