Originally Posted by TuneMonger
Good song. The male vocal sounded more contemporary and the female waay more vintage. Solo was good. The pauses in the melody irked me a little, but not a big deal. Nice job overall.

Kinda like Julio and Willie on To All The Girls I've Loved Before? Sometimes the difference makes it work. Hopefully so this time.

Thanks for mentioning the solo. The pauses are phrasing.

All in all, I'm glad you liked it. That was the purpose.


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