Originally Posted by Izzy
Hi Bob. This is a very good Pop tune which surprised me a wee bit as it branches away from your usual Jazz/Blues style. I think it has potential and deserves a remix upgrade. Your fiverr friend did an admirable job but YOU could sing this even better! One of the advantages of singing it yourself is the discovery of "singability", meaning which words and syllables effortlessly roll off the tongue. If you find that you are "pitchy" when you sing it is probably the fault of the words. Sorry to rant but I just love your vocals. Oh, and here are some suggestions for that pesky line : regards Izzy.

WOW, nine suggestions!! Thank you Izz! I have so many suggestions I don't know which to choose! Well, I have two more public domain standards to post which include a vocal by me. I don't like the vocal on either of them but I'm going to post them anyway. Thanks for the huge support for my singing, though I feel like it's quite undeserved.


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