Originally Posted by BabuMusic
First of all, what a terrific hook: "Every time I look at you I think that I might be okay." Man, very relatable from both sides. What a fine write, Bob. It has an uplifting feel that carries the words, and it builds with anticipation to the chorus. I like the mix, how you occasionally separate Tom from side to side. Good production all around. Good band. Excellent harmony choices.

Thanks, Coach! This may be far from perfect but if I can forego modesty for a moment, I love the write and the hook. I feel like it coulda/shoulda been a hit. Tom did a great job but he does screech a tiny bit on the highest notes. I tried to fix that with a Suno vocal but couldn't make it work for some reason. Thanks again!

Last edited by TuneMonger; 3 hours ago.

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