She’s got eyeliner like a highway crash
And a laugh like old cocaine
Everybody wants salvation
But they still wanna stay the same

That one made me smile.


This is a little different than your normal style. Still good stuff with your writing holding it all together. Very similar to early Springsteen in his street grit days


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You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.