When I go over your comments before l listen, they almost always make me think I should expect a train wreck. And then I listen to the song and it's always great! My favorite parts were the chorus and the bridge. Guitars brought a nice flavor to the track. I wasn't crazy about the word 'took' in the first verse. It just sounds off. (Yeah, I'm a nitpick, I know!) But the chorus more than made up for that. Of course your singing is nonpareil, as always. This coulda been a hit in that yesteryear many of us are stuck in. Great job!


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