Interesting theme that works well with the instrument tracks and chord progression. Good story-telling with interesting imagery.
I noticed that the lead vocal and backing vocals have mismatched timing. No doubt that was a deliberate choice.

"...like broken ambulance lights"
Not sure how broken ambulance lights manage to work, but I guess poetic license allows you to make words mean exactly what you want them to wink


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