Hi Laurent!
The video effects are so good, they distract from the EXCELLENT music. I’ve just gone back to listen without watching - very professional sound and distinctive melody and chord progression. I’m impressed by your style choice also, so I’m going to listen to _STUMBLE in BIAB. The instrumentation and their parts played create a lot of variation in texture - I particularly like the acoustic guitars leading into the solo, and the muted guitars in the outro.

I agree with Ron about the emphasis of some syllables. This can be a problem for me also, when I write the melody first and the melody doesn’t fit my lyrics, so I either change the lyric or change the melody. In case of the latter, I will try putting the higher melody note on the syllable with emphasis, and the less emphasised having the lower note I.e. swap the melody notes while maintaining harmonic integrity.

Anyhow, your song is excellent and very interesting and great harmonic progression to listen to.
Andrew

Last edited by Andrew Dee; 7 hours ago. Reason: Instrumentation comments