Originally Posted by vicarn
Really well done on the vocal performance, melody and instrumentals. Good song.
Just two nits smile
I agree with Bob about "took" in the first verse.
Maybe change to something like: "Thought we had what it took or a pretty good try".
The other nit is I think the electric rhythm guitar should stand back 2 or 3 db when you're singing as it's clouding your voice a little.

Vic

Vic, THANKS for the listen and the feedback. I agree, the "took" lyric is definitely not proper grammar, though it has a quirky charm that I quite like.

Have tried every trick I know to hear the electric rhythm guitars overpowering the vocals, but I can't detect it. The two guitars are panned hard left and right, and the vocals are at center. But even flipping to a mono mix didn't reveal an issue. Tried ultra low volume monitoring and I can still hear the vocals clearly, even when the guitars can't be heard at all. Have used multiple audio sources, too.

Know the odds of you reading this reply are slim, but if you do, and if you have interest in helping me figure this out, that would be helpful, and I'd be SO grateful.

But I understand if not. I mean, who has the time any more?

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