Hi Floyd!
A really classy sounding song! Very professional, yet the heart feelings come through.

I noticed the similarity between the piano and the vocal phrasing, and it made me wonder what came first for in the songwriting process? Did you start with the piano style and that informed the ‘paper and pen’ metre, or (as I suspect because of your source of inspiration) the metre and melody of the ‘paper and pen’ phrasing was then mimicked on the piano - and in the guitar? In any case, it’s really cool that one is similar to the other, and a useful idea for songwriting.

Your song reminds me of a post that Herb Hartley recently made to the Songwriting forum about what we use to write, and I think back to when I used to write (with paper and pen) lyrics with chords above and then the melody notation elsewhere on the sheet so that I could remember it. I still have those pieces of paper and they are special to me.

Thanks for bringing out this fondness in your own song!

Andrew