Very nice work.

I really like the fact that your chorus is one short line, 6 words repeated. That simplicity just works well.

The song had, to me, a clicky feel and sound to it but not uncomfortably so. From my second listen.... It's the percussion causing that. It's all good.

The steel was nice. Was that the instrument for that fuzzy sounding solo in there? I think it is after a second listen. Nice overdrive tone.

I enjoyed listening. Good job

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