I love the concept of the train sounds between verses. When I was a DJ I used to play harmonica train songs and segue them with actual train sounds as you've done here. Singing is pretty good and the song itself isn't bad at all. The prosody of the piece is a tad off to my ears. (This was also true of your Omaha song). You're so talented with chords, I'm sure it will all come together in time.


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