Originally Posted by TuneMonger
I love the concept of the train sounds between verses. When I was a DJ I used to play harmonica train songs and segue them with actual train sounds as you've done here. Singing is pretty good and the song itself isn't bad at all. The prosody of the piece is a tad off to my ears. (This was also true of your Omaha song). You're so talented with chords, I'm sure it will all come together in time.
Hi Rob!
Yes, I like the train effects as well. With the song being long and four verses to boot, the effects act as a break between each.

Regarding the prosody of this song and also Omaha, and given that the term can describe the relationship between the lyrics and music (if I understand it correctly?) and therefore can manifested in different ways, I am interested in what you are hearing. I ask this genuinely and not being defensive, because sometimes one can’t see one’s own blind spots and I am keen to improve. I hope you can point out a few examples? Good critique can be just as useful as encouraging praise to help songwriters with their development - so thank you for mentioning!

Andrew