Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Relationships are like life in general: it doesn't matter how often you fall.
What matters is how often you get back up.
Wonderful how you managed to express that wisdom in a song.
That's definitely one of my favorites smile[Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]
Thanks, Brain. I don't know, man. This guy seems to be too afraid to try new things just 'cause he failed at them before. Yeah, you're right. That happens a lot in life.

Originally Posted by WaoBand
Yep, as I wrote on the YT post, this is a very, very professional production and the pedal steel is superb. I wish I could say that I "won't go there with" a new special lady even though I think it won't go anywhere, because the good parts are always worth having had the experience.
Thanks again, Chay. i appreciate your comments. You're right. Go there.

Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
We love a happy ending so thank you, Marty!
You’re showing us your country side here and Bill’s pedal steel fit perfectly.
Sweet harmonies too.

When the percussion arrived we almost expected to see the couple riding horses in the video.
It added a sweet loping sound.

Nice performances by you and a fine open mix.

You’re on a roll, Marty, and well done!

J&B
Thanks, Janice & Bud. Ha, yeah you're talking about the horses at the Bridge. Yep, that guy was like a cat making sure there was more than one exit. smile

Originally Posted by floyd jane
Catchy
Nicely sung
Bill’s steel is nice
Smooth bass
Good mix

Love prevails

This one really sticks in your head
Cool
.fj
Thanks, Floyd. Yeah, don't believe everything you hear, right? Turns out the guy eventually left her cuz he was afraid to follow her.

Originally Posted by Guitarhacker
Very nice work.

I really like the fact that your chorus is one short line, 6 words repeated. That simplicity just works well.

The song had, to me, a clicky feel and sound to it but not uncomfortably so. From my second listen.... It's the percussion causing that. It's all good.

The steel was nice. Was that the instrument for that fuzzy sounding solo in there? I think it is after a second listen. Nice overdrive tone.

I enjoyed listening. Good job
Thanks, Herb. Yeah, i could get carried away with percussion. At least the clicks were on the beat. wink Yep, that fuzzy solo was Bill's steel. He keeps saying he wants to use it in unusual ways. i gave him a Reggae song a month ago to try, and haven't heard from him since.

Originally Posted by jannesan
Nice emotional lyrics with clever ending to reveal what "there" means. Catchy hook melody for the title. Enjoyed the only minor chord in the verses smile The bridge gives nice variation with another minor chord and the percussive elements.
The baritone guitar has the right mood to tell about the place you won't go. Bill's pedal steel works charmingly and the solo is great. Your bass and vocals are the warming blanket that holds the love's filling desire. Pleasantly positive song.

Janne
Thanks, Janne. "There." Yeah, i think this guy was too scared to go anywhere. Yep, that baritone was for emphasis for the resistance.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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