Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Originally Posted by WaoBand
Definitely one of my favourites of yours and the song concept, lyrics and chord structure are great, but unlike others I think the mix lets it down as for me it's untidy. A tighter, sharper mix would have greatly improved it.

Thanks Chay - I’m glad you liked the song. Re the mix, are you able to give some examples? As I’ve mentioned to a couple of others, I have my blind spots having been immersed in the song too long. I’d appreciate it.
Andrew

Bearing in mind that this is a very subjective view, it's in part the choice of instrumentation as all of the instruments seem to come on top of each other as opposed to complimenting each other and allowing each other some space, so for me there's a muddle - though I very much like the drums. It's so hard to be objective as I'd have certainly used 100% different instruments, though that's always the case as BiaB offers thousands of options.

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