Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Hi Izzy!
What Herb sayeth.

Also, the ‘mate’ lines are refreshing to my ears …
Say, “Mate, I’m doing fine”
Yeah we’ve all seen better days, mate


… and …
I’m beaten down, that's a hell yeah

Love the verse with the pared back band to give the bass some limelight.

It’s the sort of song that makes one want to say “Hey, can I strum along with this?”

Thumbs up!

Andrew

Late Apology 🥺

Thanks so much for the feedback, Andrew! I’m glad those "mate" lines worked.....turns out, adding "mate" to a sentence is just the lyrical equivalent of putting a hat on a dog: it immediately makes everything 10% classier. (◔_◔)

I’m thrilled you enjoyed the pared-back section; the bass and I have a complicated relationship, but we’re working on it. Would love to hear you strum along—let me know if you need the tab, or if you prefer to just wing it and hope for the best (my personal songwriting method!).

Most of my songlyrics are straight out of 'central casting' but this and my last song (Blessings) are direct from the 'university of life' and I hope they don't come across as "preachy".
These lyrics just represent my personal p.o.v.

'Onya Mate 😊

Izzy