Hi Finnajane!
Welcome to the Forum! What a great introductory song to join with! I especially loved the drone-like hums in parts of the song, but all of it was good to listen to. Good use of the BIAB tracks. I had a sneak peek at your other songs on YouTube as well - looking forward to what you post in future.

I joined the forum over a year ago and can truthfully say the folks here are very supportive but also kind and gentle in their suggestions. I hope you find it rewarding. You’ll also find that if you check out and comment on others’ User Showcase posts, you’ll get more views/followers in return, as well as gaining inspiration, ideas and skills along the way.

Andrew