Originally Posted by rsdean
Marty,

Great song! Love the message and your awesome vocal delivery. You are such a great singer.

Dave sounds excellent as usual and the whole production is top notch!

LOVED IT!

Bob
Thank you, Bob. My resume says "Bass."

Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Hi Marty!
A great non-blues song! I thought I detected a dim chord - and there it was … Ebm7b5 … half diminished! Well utilised.

I love that slow down ending - perfecto!

I had to laugh during the video when the swirling patterns cover what is going on behind closed doors. I can see why giving AI the prompts for the actual scene might be problematic. grin

Fine lyrics as well.
“… make it through the night“ Oh to be young again. But, that has a different meaning for me nowadays.

Good song!

Andrew
Thanks, Andrew. I like the way you analyse chords as you listen. Actually it was one of the reasons this song is posted before the train song, which is typical 1-4-5 stuff. Prompting Ai is always problematic, especially for old guys like me who won't learn a new language. smile

Originally Posted by TuneMonger
I think this is the prettiest song you've ever written, if memory serves. Perfect melody for the lyrics. Really impressed here, Marty, a definite personal best for you, my friend!
Haha, thanks, Bob. Prettiest song <-- i like that.

Originally Posted by WaoBand
I quote my YT comment (again) as I can't say it any better: "Beautiful song! I particularly love the chorus. The whole song can't help but leave the listener felling better than before! smile
Thanks, Chay. "...leave the listener feeling better than before!" is much appreciated.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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